Post by §§}Qùìçkè® on May 8, 2010 14:54:24 GMT -8
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[white]-[/white] : [red]Means the real fictional life.[/red]
[white]--[/white]: [red]Means the day dreaming.[/red]
[white]*[/white] : [red]Means the action by the person.[/red]
[white]Color Red[/white]: [red]Means an important person or important message.[/red]
[white]( )[/white]: [red]Means letters replaced but the character can't read it.[/red]
-It was a hot summers day. He had been worn out with his last mission with the Dragons and the Cookie Monsters in the Frie Land of Fenk. He opened up his front door and went straight for the couch. As he laid down on his couch, his mom came into the room with a fresh batch of cookies.
[blue]Eric:[/blue] [white]"Man, this week had been a long one. I can't believe I had to do all that for nothing! I should have been treated better."
[yellow]Eric's Mom:[/yellow] "Oh, don't be stubborned. It's for a good cause, and what do you mean by 'having to do all that for nothing'? You had been given 300 cookies ahead of time, and 450 after you did the mission."[/white]
[Pink]*As Eric's mom sat down next to Eric, she picked up a glass of soy milk and gave it to Eric.[/Pink]
[blue]Eric:[/blue] [white]"Mom! I hate soy milk! What happened to the good Pepsi!?"
[yellow]Eric's Mom:[/yellow] "This is better for you, Pepsi is really bad for you're kidneys."
[Pink]*Eric takes the soy milk and swallows it fast, trying to make the taste go away faster.[/Pink]
[yellow]Eric's Mom:[/yellow] "That wasn't so bad, now was it?"
[blue]Eric:[/blue] "It's drinkable at least... and Pepsi is still better!"
[yellow]Eric's Mom:[/yellow] "Well sorry! I didn't think you were going to criticize it!"
[blue]Eric:[/blue] "I'm sorry. I'm just still mad that they made me do all of that ridiculous stuff in Frie Land of Fenk.[/white]
[Pink]*Eric gets up and goes into his room thinking about what the SOT(Special Operative Team) will give him for his next mission. He starts to play around with the old gadgets he had gotten from his last mission. He thought about what kind of mission he might have. He thought of an awesome mission that he would find exciting and suspenseful. Eric started to think a little more and began to drift away...[/Pink]
[Pink]*Eric starts to go into his day dream mode.[/Pink]
--It was a dark scary stormy night with lighting and thunder going off everywhere. The rain falling down like rocks being shot down from above. There were dark green trees everywhere. Sounds of fierce animals in all direction. The sounds of grawling and howls making it seem like he was in a theater. There was nothing and no one that could help him this time. The rain soaked his hair as he was running, trying to find what he was looking for and running away from the terrifying sounds. He had no idea why he was here and what he was doing here. All he knew was that he had to find what ever he needed and get the hell out of this rain forest. He looked everywhere. In the trees, in the ground, under some rocks, behind some bushes, and yet, nothing. He was soon beginning to give up until he saw a note on the ground next to a weird looking plant. He picked up the note, trying to read the wet ink that barely shows words.
-He looked down more and found directions that were clearly visible and readable. He was confused as to why the directions were clear and not the other part of the note. He thought it was a hint and they, who ever they are, didn't want to give him the full of the mission or search. He decided the follow the directions since it was the only thing he could look upon to.
-As he followed the directions, he decided that he had to camp out because it would be a long time before he could make it all the way to his destination. He figured it would take him at least a few days. He found an opening camping ground in the rain forest and started to make a little shelter out of twigs and leafs. He was pretty skilled at these survival things because since he was a little kid, his dad had taught him everything and anything he needed to know about how to survive life. He thought that his dad wanted him to be protected just in case anything had to happen to him.
-After he had made his shelter, he started to make a fire. He used some dry wood, which was very hard to find, and a match he kept in his back pant pocket to make a fire. After the fire was made, he made a shield above the fire to cover it from the rain, which was very useful, since he didn't want to have the fire die out before he gets even warm.
-It's been over a 5 hours and the fire was still going. He decided to sleep and wake up in the morning to start another day of 'searching'. While he was sleeping, he was awoken by a grawling sound. He opened his eyes to see a huge tiger in-front of him. The tiger's breath was horrible and smelled like the smell of bathing in the sewer. The tiger's teeth were as huge as a dragons. It was a male and was protecting it's territory. The tiger was at least 11 feet long, if not, longer. There was fear his Eric's face and he knew it was too late to run away. The tiger was ready to attack. It got into it's position and pounced onto Eric.
-Sounds of screams. Nothing. Sounds of people talking. Nothing. Screaming. Nothing. Sirens. Nothing. Talking. Nothing.
-Eric was awakened by the screams of his mother. He opened his eyes and saw an oxygen mask on his face and two faces of ambulance men. He noticed that there was blood on his hands and on a red damp towel. [/white]
[white]Ambulance Man 1:[/white] [purple]"He's awake!"
[white]Ambulance Man 2:[/white] "That's good news, now we need to take him to the ER. He has severe wounds in his chest and in his arms. He is going in and out of consciousness. He is losing blood quickly. Put him into the truck."[/purple]
[Pink]*The ambulance races off to the Hospital.[/Pink]
-It was a short ride to the Hospital, which seemed like forever to Eric. He was in severe pain. He couldn't take all of this pain. It had felt as if he had been shot by a machine gun in one place over and over non-stop. His mind was replaying the scene of the tiger pouncing on him over and over, even with him trying to get it out of his head. He didn't know what had happened to him because he thought he had been day dreaming. It couldn't have been possible for someone to get hurt, or even killed in a day dream and have it actually happen in real life. He looked up seeing that the Ambulance Man 1 was trying to give him some pain medicine. Even with the pain pills, his pain was still feeling like hell.
-He went back out of consciousness and had been lost 2 times. He had been revived each time. He woke up. There he was, in a bright room with tools everywhere. He saw men and women with mask and gloves. He saw one surgeon, probably the one in charge, with a gas mask. Eric saw it being put on him and after 2 minutes, he was out.
--He woke up and saw that the fire was still going. He felt his side and found no blood. He then wondered what the heck was happening, and why. He wanted it all to stop and wanted to go back to his normal life. He wanted to have his friends back, his school back, his family back, and he mostly wanted to have the activities he loved to do back. He couldn't stand anymore of this nonsense. He needed to find a way out of this so called mission and go back to his life.
He got up and went to the fire and cooked up a dead bird that was laying on the floor a few feet away from his camp. He finished up cooking the bird and ate it for his breakfast. He got his stuff together and left the camp to go search for this tiger. He was eager to find it and by any means necessary, take the message or item from the tiger's digestive system. He almost puked thinking of what he might had have to do.
And so began his search. He was searching for plains here and there, there and here. He could not find any opening that would be where a tiger would be. He then began re-thinking what the note had said. The tiger lies near a plain.
After he thought about that, he knew exactly what was happening, but at the same time, he knew nothing. He remembered this place from somewhere, and yet he doesn't know what to do or where to go. He had a feeling that the tiger and the field should be about 2 miles North-East. He went with his senses and walked for about 30 minutes. Eric was actually surprised he found the place. He wasn't sure how he knew, and yet he had a feeling that he knew this place by heart.
Eric searched for the tiger and couldn't find him. He couldn't find him at least until he saw a tree in the middle and saw a tiger lying under the tree sleeping. Eric crept slowly up to the tiger thinking what he would need to do to get what ever he needs out of the tiger.
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[red]Still more to come. This is just some of the story.[/red]
An Adventure
[/size][/green][white]-[/white] : [red]Means the real fictional life.[/red]
[white]--[/white]: [red]Means the day dreaming.[/red]
[white]*[/white] : [red]Means the action by the person.[/red]
[white]Color Red[/white]: [red]Means an important person or important message.[/red]
[white]( )[/white]: [red]Means letters replaced but the character can't read it.[/red]
-It was a hot summers day. He had been worn out with his last mission with the Dragons and the Cookie Monsters in the Frie Land of Fenk. He opened up his front door and went straight for the couch. As he laid down on his couch, his mom came into the room with a fresh batch of cookies.
[blue]Eric:[/blue] [white]"Man, this week had been a long one. I can't believe I had to do all that for nothing! I should have been treated better."
[yellow]Eric's Mom:[/yellow] "Oh, don't be stubborned. It's for a good cause, and what do you mean by 'having to do all that for nothing'? You had been given 300 cookies ahead of time, and 450 after you did the mission."[/white]
[Pink]*As Eric's mom sat down next to Eric, she picked up a glass of soy milk and gave it to Eric.[/Pink]
[blue]Eric:[/blue] [white]"Mom! I hate soy milk! What happened to the good Pepsi!?"
[yellow]Eric's Mom:[/yellow] "This is better for you, Pepsi is really bad for you're kidneys."
[Pink]*Eric takes the soy milk and swallows it fast, trying to make the taste go away faster.[/Pink]
[yellow]Eric's Mom:[/yellow] "That wasn't so bad, now was it?"
[blue]Eric:[/blue] "It's drinkable at least... and Pepsi is still better!"
[yellow]Eric's Mom:[/yellow] "Well sorry! I didn't think you were going to criticize it!"
[blue]Eric:[/blue] "I'm sorry. I'm just still mad that they made me do all of that ridiculous stuff in Frie Land of Fenk.[/white]
[Pink]*Eric gets up and goes into his room thinking about what the SOT(Special Operative Team) will give him for his next mission. He starts to play around with the old gadgets he had gotten from his last mission. He thought about what kind of mission he might have. He thought of an awesome mission that he would find exciting and suspenseful. Eric started to think a little more and began to drift away...[/Pink]
[Pink]*Eric starts to go into his day dream mode.[/Pink]
--It was a dark scary stormy night with lighting and thunder going off everywhere. The rain falling down like rocks being shot down from above. There were dark green trees everywhere. Sounds of fierce animals in all direction. The sounds of grawling and howls making it seem like he was in a theater. There was nothing and no one that could help him this time. The rain soaked his hair as he was running, trying to find what he was looking for and running away from the terrifying sounds. He had no idea why he was here and what he was doing here. All he knew was that he had to find what ever he needed and get the hell out of this rain forest. He looked everywhere. In the trees, in the ground, under some rocks, behind some bushes, and yet, nothing. He was soon beginning to give up until he saw a note on the ground next to a weird looking plant. He picked up the note, trying to read the wet ink that barely shows words.
If you are reading this:
[/center][red]You are prob(ably) tryin(g) to find what ever it i(s) you ne(ed) to find. I am here to tell you (that it will be tough) . You will need to (go) inside a tiger's mou(th). The tiger lies near a plain (under a tree) . You will need to foll(ow) these directi(ons) given to go to the (fearless tiger).[/red]
-He looked down more and found directions that were clearly visible and readable. He was confused as to why the directions were clear and not the other part of the note. He thought it was a hint and they, who ever they are, didn't want to give him the full of the mission or search. He decided the follow the directions since it was the only thing he could look upon to.
-As he followed the directions, he decided that he had to camp out because it would be a long time before he could make it all the way to his destination. He figured it would take him at least a few days. He found an opening camping ground in the rain forest and started to make a little shelter out of twigs and leafs. He was pretty skilled at these survival things because since he was a little kid, his dad had taught him everything and anything he needed to know about how to survive life. He thought that his dad wanted him to be protected just in case anything had to happen to him.
-After he had made his shelter, he started to make a fire. He used some dry wood, which was very hard to find, and a match he kept in his back pant pocket to make a fire. After the fire was made, he made a shield above the fire to cover it from the rain, which was very useful, since he didn't want to have the fire die out before he gets even warm.
-It's been over a 5 hours and the fire was still going. He decided to sleep and wake up in the morning to start another day of 'searching'. While he was sleeping, he was awoken by a grawling sound. He opened his eyes to see a huge tiger in-front of him. The tiger's breath was horrible and smelled like the smell of bathing in the sewer. The tiger's teeth were as huge as a dragons. It was a male and was protecting it's territory. The tiger was at least 11 feet long, if not, longer. There was fear his Eric's face and he knew it was too late to run away. The tiger was ready to attack. It got into it's position and pounced onto Eric.
-Sounds of screams. Nothing. Sounds of people talking. Nothing. Screaming. Nothing. Sirens. Nothing. Talking. Nothing.
-Eric was awakened by the screams of his mother. He opened his eyes and saw an oxygen mask on his face and two faces of ambulance men. He noticed that there was blood on his hands and on a red damp towel. [/white]
[white]Ambulance Man 1:[/white] [purple]"He's awake!"
[white]Ambulance Man 2:[/white] "That's good news, now we need to take him to the ER. He has severe wounds in his chest and in his arms. He is going in and out of consciousness. He is losing blood quickly. Put him into the truck."[/purple]
[Pink]*The ambulance races off to the Hospital.[/Pink]
-It was a short ride to the Hospital, which seemed like forever to Eric. He was in severe pain. He couldn't take all of this pain. It had felt as if he had been shot by a machine gun in one place over and over non-stop. His mind was replaying the scene of the tiger pouncing on him over and over, even with him trying to get it out of his head. He didn't know what had happened to him because he thought he had been day dreaming. It couldn't have been possible for someone to get hurt, or even killed in a day dream and have it actually happen in real life. He looked up seeing that the Ambulance Man 1 was trying to give him some pain medicine. Even with the pain pills, his pain was still feeling like hell.
-He went back out of consciousness and had been lost 2 times. He had been revived each time. He woke up. There he was, in a bright room with tools everywhere. He saw men and women with mask and gloves. He saw one surgeon, probably the one in charge, with a gas mask. Eric saw it being put on him and after 2 minutes, he was out.
--He woke up and saw that the fire was still going. He felt his side and found no blood. He then wondered what the heck was happening, and why. He wanted it all to stop and wanted to go back to his normal life. He wanted to have his friends back, his school back, his family back, and he mostly wanted to have the activities he loved to do back. He couldn't stand anymore of this nonsense. He needed to find a way out of this so called mission and go back to his life.
He got up and went to the fire and cooked up a dead bird that was laying on the floor a few feet away from his camp. He finished up cooking the bird and ate it for his breakfast. He got his stuff together and left the camp to go search for this tiger. He was eager to find it and by any means necessary, take the message or item from the tiger's digestive system. He almost puked thinking of what he might had have to do.
And so began his search. He was searching for plains here and there, there and here. He could not find any opening that would be where a tiger would be. He then began re-thinking what the note had said. The tiger lies near a plain.
After he thought about that, he knew exactly what was happening, but at the same time, he knew nothing. He remembered this place from somewhere, and yet he doesn't know what to do or where to go. He had a feeling that the tiger and the field should be about 2 miles North-East. He went with his senses and walked for about 30 minutes. Eric was actually surprised he found the place. He wasn't sure how he knew, and yet he had a feeling that he knew this place by heart.
Eric searched for the tiger and couldn't find him. He couldn't find him at least until he saw a tree in the middle and saw a tiger lying under the tree sleeping. Eric crept slowly up to the tiger thinking what he would need to do to get what ever he needs out of the tiger.
[white]The summary of the story.[/white]
[blue]I know that some of you guys get bored reading something long. So, this is just a little bit of what was going on in this story:[/blue]
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It all started when Eric came home after his last mission he had to do for a government. He was tired of doing it because he thought it was all pointless and they were just trying to use him. He decided to come up with an idea that he would have for his next mission to make it more exciting and better. His ability that he can do is day dream and what ever he dreams of, comes to life.
Since he has that ability, he is wanted all over the world to help them out with big and small problems depending on how their personality is. They would pay much more money then anyone else just to get Eric to do what they want him to do/daydream up. Eric found this annoying, so as he was day dreaming, he had dreamed of a mission he would want to have. Unfortunately, he had came up with a bad dream that left him with a 'bloody scar on his side'.
[/red] ^^^ I'll edit it when I have time. ^^^Since he has that ability, he is wanted all over the world to help them out with big and small problems depending on how their personality is. They would pay much more money then anyone else just to get Eric to do what they want him to do/daydream up. Eric found this annoying, so as he was day dreaming, he had dreamed of a mission he would want to have. Unfortunately, he had came up with a bad dream that left him with a 'bloody scar on his side'.
[red]Still more to come. This is just some of the story.[/red]
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