§§}Death
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[ico26(1)][P:0]^#Recruit_br
Of course i'm the sleepy god of riddles; what else did you expect??
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Post by §§}Death on Jun 23, 2010 20:18:19 GMT -8
here are two more for you lot to a) tear to pieces b) praise ^.^
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q77e
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Post by q77e on Jun 23, 2010 21:02:08 GMT -8
b) great job both look good
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§§}Velocity
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Post by §§}Velocity on Jun 24, 2010 0:29:06 GMT -8
1st one: a) Wayyy to contrasted, especially his face and to the right of his face. Text is pretty avg, try playing around with some dif basic fonts. The lighting is off and pretty bad stock quality. And anything else Ive missed that Ive told you over xfire. b) I'm liking the colours. Probably one of you worst imo.. 2nd one: a) The depth looks a lil off (smudging looks in front of the focal). The purple line, to the left of the text, kills the flow a little. b) Love the colours, love the flow, love the smudging, the text is alright and I love the lighting
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§§}Death
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[ico26(1)][P:0]^#Recruit_br
Of course i'm the sleepy god of riddles; what else did you expect??
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Post by §§}Death on Jun 24, 2010 4:10:42 GMT -8
haha the line, and the stuff to the left of her, were her wings, i purposely smudged them into the bg ^.^ but i see what u mean, kind of screws with flow, =P
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